Date: 20 May 2015 21:21 Title: Scotty
I've been reading through these little vignettes and enjoying them. You have a good handle on the characters and have put them in interesting situations that display their special friendship. Well written. I'm looking forward to more.
Date: 18 May 2015 12:35 Title: Scotty
First of all, welcome back to fiction writing. If this is anything to go by, we've all missed out for those ten years! A really nice little scene, you captured both Scotty and Spock's characters perfectly. And I love the fact that Spock wants to make something special for McCoy! BFFs indeed! :) Look forward to the follow on.
Date: 18 May 2015 04:00 Title: Scotty
Yeah, now that's some love there. You captured that unique vibe between Scotty and Spock beautifully, really liked the pacing and the little touches of character. I have a lot of questions, but I'll hold off on them until the next part. Nice job. :)
Date: 17 May 2015 23:51 Title: Scotty
Oh, I like this! I love your comparisons and parallels between Scott and Spock -- things I never really dwelt on, but they do make sense. And it's always nice to see that glimmer of humanity beneath Spock's hard-fought Vulcan exterior.
We'll see what comes of Spock's idea, I guess!
Date: 17 May 2015 21:25 Title: Scotty
Awww. he's going to make hooch for McCoy. Awesome. This is a fantastic introudction to your writing Zilley and a wondrous return to the TOS fold for me. So many little spot on lines there - Spock and Scotty having the longest relationship and yet complex given how much they have in common and how much they don't. Also, thumbs up for why Vulcan was known as a dry planet. Awesome. Loved it. Fantastic. Looking forward to more.
Date: 17 May 2015 19:57 Title: Scotty
AH! I love it! Spock putting his hand to making booze; what an awesome thought. The writing was perfectly good and the interaction was lovely. Great first entry, and I'm looking forward to the next!
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2015 18:46 Title: Scotty
Oh, excellent! Your first story! Your first review! W00t!
Careful of the balloon drop.
Anyways - good capture of both well-known characters, and an interesting premise!
Now, you also need to add your story to the Challenge. Go to Challenge, select TTOT15 (I think it's called that, but it should be pretty clear), click on Answer the Challenge, select your story and hit OK and you're done.
Welcome; this is quite the auspicious beginning. :)