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Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2021 15:27 Title: Part V: The Uneasy Truth: 1

So the thulians are involved in Lam's little engineering exercise...

Very good storytelling. Of course Star doesn't know the significance of it - if she did she would abandon Mahoney in favor of her own captain.

Like how this is coming together. 

Thanks!! rbs



Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. And yeah, if our characters knew everything we did, stories would run a very different course. It's why those darned kids always go to the cemetery in a horror movie.

Reviewer: Shada Dukal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2015 14:11 Title: Part V: The Uneasy Truth: 1

Taz is magnificent, the good old Taz breaking rules and laws with dramatic nonchalance and hooligan cockiness. I adore that Trill. Still, her efforts were worthwhile, the chosen course really does not make any sense. And all that garnished with Mahoney’s nagging, Nora’s doubts, Xylion’s distrust and Katanga’s open disapproval. Still, when Taz really wants to do something, she is unstoppable.

Author's Response: Taz remains a force to be reckoned with and I'm glad she still resonates with you. She's taking awfully big risks here, determined to do it her way. It could garner her a one-way ticket back into stockade though, if she's not careful.

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