Reviews For Semper Fidelis
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Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2021 14:00 Title: Part IV: The Improbable Alliance: 7

Then the monastary is the last place they should go...

Always fun to involve aliens in romantic affairs - although I suspect they would be a little put off by scents and tastes. On the other hand, they might find each other inappropriately delicious and carry on rather dangerously... "Tastes like.. peppermint cotton candy?"

But despite Michael's and Deen's well founded misgivings I would enjoy seeing this relationship explored more.

Thanks!! rbs

 



Author's Response: That's a great call. For simplicity and to spice up the Owens/Sharval relationship, I've followed the usual sci-fi/Trek convention where attractive people of different species will always find each other attractive, no matter what. In reality there would be a whole lot of biological differences to overcome. I need to think of building something like that into my next interspecies relationship. That sounds like fun.

Reviewer: Shada Dukal Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2015 21:36 Title: Part IV: The Improbable Alliance: 7

Impossible mission first, now we have a love triangle with Captain Owens as an object of conflicting alien desires. Not to mention his past affair that Deen brings up. This is beautiful, but still this power plant looks pretty well fortified. Besides, they don’t have Eagle in orbit so I wonder whether the locals could muster up some guerrilla outfit.

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the ongoing reviews. Also glad you're enjoying the little interlude here. Nothing like a bit of misplaced romance in the middle of a war ...

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