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Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2021 14:17 Title: Part IV: The Improbable Alliance: 6

That sounds like more than a pirate attack. Appears that peace has failed to break out on at least two fronts.

Lots of fun things to work with in this chapter, but the demise of the colony is probably the most interesting. 

Leva is definitely in a tight spot. 

Thanks!! rbs



Author's Response: Leva's position in not enviable, I guess. The man will have to navigate some tough seas, stuck as he is in-between to head strong personalities.

Reviewer: Shada Dukal Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2015 20:34 Title: Part IV: The Improbable Alliance: 6

These pirates are much more dangerous than expected. Two Starfleet vessels could not stop them from attacking the colony. Leva becomes more and more suspicious, the whole thing seems too foul to him. Mahoney can’t control and hide his animosity very well and this affects his decisions.

Both crews entertain doubts and question the rationale of their commanders.

Author's Response: Yeah, as if Leva and company didn't have enough problems already having to deal with this complicated situation, right? Now it seems that perhaps the threat these pirates pose is even worse than whatever internal feud is developing here.

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