[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2015 18:07 Title: Chapter Six
Good job with the combat scene, had a sense of realism and the frustration of the pirates getting away as they rescue the freighter crew. Good way to show the lawlessness that now affects the sector.
Teelis advice to Dominic shows he only dodge one bullet there are more coming from his grandmother.
Good Job.
Date: 29 Jan 2015 00:54 Title: Chapter Six
That was an awesome awkward moment for all involved when Krystine Leone, the former starship captain, came striding onto the bridge and giving orders as if it was her own ship. For a moment there I thought I could here the sound of crickets. Fortunately the true master of the ship showed up in time to avoid the situation becoming completely uncomfortable.
Looks as if Betazed has about 99 problems, no wonder they're not a happy bunch. Now we've got piracy as well? Deep within Federation territory no less. That's not going to go over well.