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Reviewer: FalseBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2015 17:31 Title: Chapter Four

An interesting meal scene and the interplay between the characters feel right.
Was interesting to see what Teelis advice was to Dominic and then his own decision about the way forward.

Going to be interesting to see happens when they reach Betazed and how Dominic future plays out.

Reviewer: trekfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2015 19:05 Title: Chapter Four

Well, the Leone family circus continues. You have to feel for Dom, being caught up in this is tug-of-war between his grandmother and his own life (and now introducing his mother into the equation). Meanwhile, Admiral Leone out in space is barely keeping it together -- understandable, but definitely not good. Really liked the thoughts expressed by Abbie and Andrus here, the conversation was well-paced and frank (Andrus is quickly becoming a favorite character). Will Abbie intervene and will it have the desired effect?

Reviewer: CeJay Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2015 01:54 Title: Chapter Four

Krystine Leone needs some serious counseling. It seems fittingly ironic then that she is on her way to Betazed. Too bad that she needs up work through her issues long before she gets there if she wants to avoid a disaster of a diplomatic mission.

Dominic in the meantime is not going down without a fight and is clearly determined to purse every avenue at his disposal to fight his grandmothers unwelcome meddling in his career. Good thing mommy dearest has her mother's boss on speed dial. Not sure if i mentioned that yet, but there sure are a lot of admirals in this story.

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