Reviews For Semper Fidelis
You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2021 14:27 Title: Part III - The Olive Branch: 7

I have no doubt Star will find a way to even the odds with Mahoney. Of course having West on board during this mission complicates things. 

Nice turnaround with Mahoney. 

I'm also sure that her absence will cause problems for Owens...

Good story building. Thanks!! rbs



Author's Response: You gotta root for Star here, right? As for Owens, absolutely. He's probably going to come to regret his logic in the long run, even if it was a convenient in the short term.

Reviewer: Shada Dukal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2015 16:19 Title: Part III - The Olive Branch: 7

Mahoney has switched from euphoria to delusion of grandeur. I bet he sees himself sitting in the acceleration chair of an Enterprise or Galaxy class ship, waving goodbye to his insignificant stint on “Sacajawea”. Chasing those pirates might bring him back to the fast track to the top-notch positions.

Although he is armed, I don’t think he would dare to use his phaser on the bridge. I wonder if the other crewmembers will listen to him slandering Taz and if Deva will support him. This is pretty tough for Taz but sometimes bygones refuse to be bygones.

Author's Response: Nothing more dangerous than a man with a purpose, I suppose. We'll have to see how far Mahoney is willing to go in order to be relevant again.

Reviewer: Gibraltar Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2015 06:53 Title: Part III - The Olive Branch: 7

Mahoney has a date with a well deserved comeuppance. I just hope it doesn't cost any lives other than his...



Author's Response: Some people change. Obviously Star doesn't believe Mahoney has or perhaps ever will. But hey, there's always a chance.

You must login (register) to review.