[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2014 20:15 Title: Epilogue: Lessons Learned
Well that was a little unexpected and yet so obvious fall-out, perhaps Schmidt and Neil relationship has being restored but has the lesion being learnt?
I am not so sure but time will tell for Maren and Icheb.
Again you deliver a fine ending and the moral of the story is cleverly reinforce as Schmidt fall upon his sword because he knows it time to quit as he lost his impartial balance in trying to stop Maren ending up like Caris.
Thank you for writing this story and giving us another insight into Maren and Icheb past, it was as always to your own high standard.
Date: 22 Oct 2014 19:24 Title: Epilogue: Lessons Learned
I think this was a beautiful end to the story. It wrapped up all the loose ends well, in a manner that was both believable and appealing to the readers. It's good to see that everyone has seemed to have learned from the experiences they went through. Well done, I've really liked this story :-D
Date: 22 Oct 2014 00:34 Title: Epilogue: Lessons Learned
A perfectly paced ending to an exciting and surprisingly deep story. Schmidt got his due and ended up acknowledging his mistakes at the end (Neil is a bigger and better person than I for makng up with him). Maren, perhaps, learns an important lesson about knowing when to quit and it's a lesson everyone needs to learn. The hearing was very well done (the Bolian admiral was a nice touch, don't see many of them at that high a rank) and I thoroughly enjoyed this story beginning to end.
Bravo. :)
Date: 22 Oct 2014 00:34 Title: Epilogue: Lessons Learned
The scenario makes sense, and it definitely rescues Schmidt from being really evil at all - a sign of a character that's three dimensional, like they all should be. Well done.