Date: 22 Oct 2014 05:25 Title: I've Turned Into a Monster
Wow. Damn. Fetal abduction... a new low in the fabric of the universe's tapestry of evil. I almost with Emmarie had remained in her feral, animal woman state. At least then she'd have been somewhat shielded from the horrific truth of what's been done to her, and what's been taken from her.
And who the frell names a doctor Frell? ;-) Sounds vaguely Denobulan...
A wicked beginning, and once again, you've got me hooked!
Author's Response: Somewhat fortunately, Emmarie hasn't had an easy life, so she's used to handling strife. Unfortunately, that doesn't REALLY prepare her for the full horror of something like this.. though I don't think anything really can. The doctor was named Frell because I couldn't think of a good name, LOL. Glad to know you enjoyed this, thanks as always for reading!
Date: 21 Oct 2014 00:54 Title: I've Turned Into a Monster
That's indeed an interesting look at what a mental breakdown for an Orion animal woman would look like. I assume mental breakdowns are different for most people, even within the same species, but this display here made a lot of sense considering this extremely cruel ordeal she went through. The confusion and the pain are palpable.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading :-D I definitely agree that different people will take bad things in a different manner, but I thought that without her discipline she would sort of regress a bit into a more "typical" Orion.