[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2014 19:47 Title: Chapter 14: A World of Hurt
So we finally see someone give Schmidt the left hook that he seems to deserve, but strangely like Neil it does indeed feel unsatisfactory because his reasons do indeed come straight from the road to hell is paved with good intentions proverb.
In some hand this could have being a filler chapter but your good prose and writing skill make it an interesting insight into all three men minds.
I do wonder if in truth if Neil and Schmidt aren’t the opposite sides of the same coin and their remaining guilty over Caris death has over colored how they approach life since. All in all a fascinating read.
Date: 18 Oct 2014 23:32 Title: Chapter 14: A World of Hurt
Nope, still hate Schmidt. He may be right, but his methods are just wrong. The ends can't justify the means. Good on Neil for decking him.
Date: 30 Sep 2014 23:57 Title: Chapter 14: A World of Hurt
Very interesting dynamic here. Did Schmidt bait Neill on purpose to get that reaction and give the man a chance at venting his frustration? Either that or Schmist is the biggest douche in the galaxy. I just don't know about this guy, some of the stuff he says makes sense.
Date: 30 Sep 2014 02:11 Title: Chapter 14: A World of Hurt
GO NEIL!
This chapter was extremely satisfying. :-D
Date: 30 Sep 2014 00:00 Title: Chapter 14: A World of Hurt
I like that, for Neil, the punch proves to be dissatisfying (often these kinds of things are).