Date: 30 Sep 2014 01:50 Title: Chapter 10: Alert
Ooof. Fortunately it seems like she's arrived just in time. Still, something tells me there are consequences to everything that she and Icheb have done.
Here's to hoping that Schmidt goes down too, preferably right after Maren or B'Elanna punch him.
Date: 21 Sep 2014 20:41 Title: Chapter 10: Alert
Well then Maren made it (just) to Alert. This has a certainly being a survival test and half. You’ve manage all the way to Alert to keep us guessing if Maren will indeed pass this test on the first attempt, also will Icheb be able to keep his little help from the Schmidt? All in all an enjoyable read that being fun to follow and learn more about the key players of your stories.
Date: 20 Sep 2014 17:27 Title: Chapter 10: Alert
And she made it. Of course I never had a shred of doubt that she would. This was a survival test worth it's name and very nearly one Maren would have failed simply by not surviving.
All is well that ends well. Maren gets her moment of triumph and Icheb gets to serve with the woman he loves on future assignments. Not sure how well that'll turn out for everybody concerned.
Author's Response:
Oh, we're not finished yet, CeJay.
Date: 20 Sep 2014 04:03 Title: Chapter 10: Alert
Oh, I hope we see Neil again. :)
Date: 20 Sep 2014 01:56 Title: Chapter 10: Alert
MAREN FTW! Fuck you Schmit. Lose your commission. Let the VOY crew at him.