Date: 30 Sep 2014 01:10 Title: Chapter 4: Level Fourteen
Poor Icheb :-/ Schmidt's threats are pretty petty. I understand his desire to make sure their relationship won't lead to either of them being compromised, but you can't expect lovers NOT to work together.
Is the trap here for Maren, or is it really to try and prove that Icheb isn't fit for Starfleet service?
Date: 20 Sep 2014 16:19 Title: Chapter 4: Level Fourteen
An almost prophetic warning here from the apathetic Schmidt. Perhaps he isn't entirely mistaken about Maren and Icheb serving on the same boat together, considering the trouble they'll get in once on the Tesseract.
Date: 16 Sep 2014 20:07 Title: Chapter 4: Level Fourteen
Ok, the stakes keep on getting higher. Interesting that Schmidt seems to have put his finger on exactly what Icheb was most afraid of: having to face a psych test that included Maren. At the same time, yay Maren! Well done to her for figuring out the message Icheb was trying to pass her, especially considering how tired she had to be. Will she be able to stall here and even if she can, for how long can she hold out? I have a bad feeling about this...
Date: 16 Sep 2014 15:47 Title: Chapter 4: Level Fourteen
Yay! Maren figured it out and decided to pass out. Schmidt isn't very nice, but he's right; the two have to prove they can work together. This is as good a way as any to do so, especially with the DQ mission looming and the importance Starfleet has placed upon it.
Date: 15 Sep 2014 23:13 Title: Chapter 4: Level Fourteen
Well clearly Schmidt isn’t a fool and is wondering how Maren got through those code so fast but stop at the final code. Still it was a good moment and when handled realization by Maren what the code meant and her clever way to hide that she recognized the last code for what it was.
Again you did a great job with all your characters thought process in this chapter.
Will be interesting to see what the next chapter and morning brings.
Ominous last comment for Icheb. Great work as always.
Date: 15 Sep 2014 01:19 Title: Chapter 4: Level Fourteen
Butterscotch .... Man oh man .... nastiness!