Date: 01 Aug 2014 13:54 Title: Chapter 3 - Communications
A nice little bit of background on your protagonists here. This is my first real experience with your canine race so that's certainly quite interesting. If I remember right the females in that species had very limited rights in your 22nd century based stories. Good thing things have changed, even if they could obviously improve further.
And Mack used to be in prison? Now that's a story I want to hear more about.
Author's Response:
Yep, and thanks - yeah, the Daranaeans are sexist and their society is ... odd. Very doglike, so they live in packlike structures, that sort of things. And the women are oppressed although this is later and things are changing.
I'll post another chapter, um, later today. :)
Date: 31 Jul 2014 22:58 Title: Chapter 3 - Communications
Well this keeps getting more interesting and we starting to learn more about your three main characters, my only question is Mack going to hire male and female athletics to help her enter as many sports as she can, plus how she going to vet for Daniya?
I'm looking forward to the next instalment.
Author's Response:
Ah, thank you. There will be a lot of people (and I know already that's an issue). Too many names! Too much detail! I'm trying to let the selection process, etc. unfold naturally but it's not easy. Plus because I want this to be a four-book series, I need some of these people.