Date: 04 Jan 2010 18:12 Title: Chapter Ten - Part One
After the build up to their appearance the hype did not disappoint. That was an intense and scary scene with Beth and other captains at the mercy of this strange power. The images are truly frightening and no wonder Beth is ready to believe that they do indeen intend harm.
But she fights through it and then discovers that The Shent are behind the horrors. Crikey a turn of events and puts everything on its head. We see now some reason for the Shent peculiar behaviour in the previous instalments and can hope that the Reman and Romulan offerings lived a peaceful and happy life until the Shent.
Just one little concern ... the Ghosts are feeding the images to Beth - that doesn't mean they are neccessarily the truth. What if they are genuinely bad guys with an ulterior motive to cause trouble once more between the Federation and the Shent. Excuse my suspicions, but with this fine writing and the fact Q is on the scene nothing can be said to be straightforward.
Specatular events and the story reaches a fever pitch point.
Date: 08 Apr 2009 06:05 Title: Chapter Ten - Part One
::bawls:: Don't just leave me hanging there...!
Seriously, Terilynn, this is really good stuff. I don't even traditionally read TNG fic, and I'm reading this pretty much as you post it.