Date: 14 Jun 2014 03:14 Title: Chapter 4
Man oh. I thought they had managed the impossible, but that's when you chose to jerk the rug out from under us.
Date: 11 Jun 2014 00:55 Title: Chapter 4
Damn. I thought they had somehow pulled the impossible off there for a second. That you had lured us into the defeatist mentality. It seemed victory was indeed possible. Maybe the play on Demons was the fact the Angels had fought like demons - they did - but damn, the announcement of a second fleet. Shit meet fan.
Date: 10 Jun 2014 19:08 Title: Chapter 4
Oh man! You did a great job describing the battle, difficult to do but done here with panache. And then to see a new fleet is on its way... Despair! Great job.
Date: 08 Jun 2014 12:26 Title: Chapter 4
All those sacrifice and it seems it will be for nothing.
Can Angel fleet stop the Fall (Of course not) but I’m sure there tale will be worth hearing good work.
Date: 07 Jun 2014 21:48 Title: Chapter 4
No happy, neat little ending here, I see.
A lot of people shy away from killing their darlings or providing true adversity to their characters. I am pleased and impressed to see you doing both here.
Author's Response: There was no other way for it. If you go to the forums, in the "Soundtrack of your fic" thread, I posted the song that's been inspiring a lot of the writing for this one. It was going to be helpless and tragic...it was just a matter of getting comfortable enough doing it, which I'm still not sure I really got. If nothing else, it was good practice.
Date: 07 Jun 2014 20:06 Title: Chapter 4
Damn. The Dominion isn't messing around. That's relentless.
Author's Response: CaptainSarine's "The Fall/Restoration" timeline is (obviously) very different from the original timeline; I envisioned a lot of the numbers and relentlessness we see in battles at Chintoka and the run for DS9 when I started thinking of the numbers of Dominion ships for this, especially since (in this timeline) the Dominion has unrestricted access to through the wormhole. They can just pour their full might into any battle.