Date: 13 Jun 2014 20:31 Title: Chapter 1
Holy crap! That was an intense beginning. I haven't read Tesseract yet, but know enough about these characters to know that you got them spot-on, and that this is going to be a nail-biting, show-stopping wild ride into the darker side of kes' creations. Can't wait to see how this Maren reacts to the Borg King, and what JQ will think of her relationship to him (or even his own) in our Maren's universe.
Date: 11 Jun 2014 08:21 Title: Chapter 1
Wow...I never considered the Mirror Borg being that...feral! Wonderful picture you've begun to paint here.
Date: 08 Jun 2014 10:33 Title: Chapter 1
Strong opening, the little details really hook the reader and show your level of though into mirroring Tesseract.
Author's Response: Thanks FB! Glad you liked it.
Date: 03 Jun 2014 15:33 Title: Chapter 1
Oh, absolutely delicious. I love the way this worked out, from JQ and Maren to the hint of the Borg King's identity. Can't wait to see where you take this.
Author's Response: Thanks man! I know you're as big a fan as Tesseract as i am, so I'm glad this meets with your approval so far.
Date: 03 Jun 2014 05:38 Title: Chapter 1
Oh, this is freaking epic. I'm grinning from ear to ear, here. Nicely done! I can't wait to see where you're taking this!
Mirror Universe ... only bad things can happen. Maren, honey, your life sucks. At least this time I'm not the one torturing you. Loved the interplay between her and mirror JQ -- and how interesting that they're together in that universe. I can't imagine that will get complicated at all ...
Nice to see Telek front and center for once! And resisting the Borg King ... with a small ridge in the middle of his forehead.
Oh, Maren. You are so, so screwed.
Author's Response: Hope the direction this goes in will meet with your approval, after all this is supposed to be a (twisted) homage to the greatness that is Tesseract! :) Yes, I thought I would give you a break from the torturing. I almost had a different character in that scene but then thought I'd quickly scroll through Tesseract and look for Andorians and lo and behold: Telek! Glad you like him.
Date: 02 Jun 2014 21:50 Title: Chapter 1
Oh ho ho, this promises to be a fun and wild ride!
Author's Response: Hope so! Thanks for the review!
Date: 02 Jun 2014 21:50 Title: Chapter 1
Ho. Wow. Yowzers. Now way. Jaw dropping. Really? Could it be?! No way.
All of the above are the different possible openers to this review. In a short space there was a lot you threw at us. From a JQ declaring action on Maren to the reveal of his being his mirror universe counterpart, to his kidnapping Maren to save said Mirror Universe - from the Borg - and me thinks from the Borg King in particular. Hmm, would he be anyone we know? Could you really go there. Damned intriguing that much is for sure. This could be wild and fun and scary as shit. Bring it.
Author's Response: Yay! Yay! Yay! The only way to start this response to your review :) So glad you liked this, I hope I can do justice to Kes' fantastic characters, even if most of them will be their mirror universe counterparts. Can't wait to see what you think of the continuation. :D