Reviewer: Miranda Fave Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2010 21:35 Title: Chapter Nine - Part Two

Oh Shentarians showing up, Tachyon bursts leading them into the only possible route, being followed by a cleverly cloaked vessel possibly Ghost alien in and of itself and all the while heading into the Lion's Den. Yup, that's when Q would show up. Damn, your chapters leave a person hanging as well as punching the guts of the reader. Some more warm and wonderful exchanges to open and then the soccer punch ending. Damn fine writing and reading.