Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2020 15:46 Title: Chapter Twelve - Infraction

Of course there would be a textbook referred to as "Archer" - nice touch and a fair moment of lecture. It's always fun to write Trek speeches (something I have been accused of overindulging in.) Interesting side effect - you always pay for mucking about in time.

I like the monsterous description of SB1 - tracks with what we see in the movies. Humanity is capable of producing ginormous structures in space... 

Quite liking this Gene Eddison character. I'm sure you gave him a good send off. I'm wondering who the masked man was in Admiral Carter's office but I suspect it rhymes with Ron Smowins.

Leva continues to be a really fun character. Good hero work.

Thanks!! rbs

Author's Response: Yeah, you're on the right track with the hidden participant in that meeting. What was really fun about this story is the fact that we get to see some of Michael Owens history using the time travel plot to help establish the character moving forward. Glad you enjoyed Leva here too.