Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2020 14:10 Title: Chapter Eleven - Last Breath

Reunification is the flavor of the day... Excellent classic Trek scene between Edison and Leva.

An interesting visit to what more or less amounts to Olympus/Asgard - an interesting bit of world building. One of the unique joys of writing in the Trek universe is getting to create these places and cultures.

Nothing like a death-bed sequence to unite romantic rivals. Very interesting character passing away in this story.

Thanks!! rbs

Author's Response: Olympus is probably a great analogy for it, I probably hadn't consciously thought of it. I know Edison doesn't get a whole lot to do in this story which might be one of the contributing factors for his eventual demise and replacement.