Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2020 19:23 Title: Chapter Eight - Cornered

Superb reveal on Nakar - that was a fun scene. With enough clues to hint at it in retrospect without giving it away - Well done! And a good cliff-hanger (and probably ending) for the conflict between Leva and Xylion.

I'm also quite enjoying Owens and his crowd trying to do the "we're really not Star Fleet" thing when their training stamps it all over them. Covert operatives require special training. Nora might pull it off because she's the real article. And now Deen is on the hot seat. 

A really fun pickle. 

Thanks!! rbs

Author's Response: Oh yeah, no doubt about it, Eagle's crew is not training in this kind of thing. That's them pretty much winging it with mixed results. Glad the Nakar reveal worked as well. Evil Vulcan not quite so Vulcan.