Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2020 13:57 Title: Chapter One - Yesterday's Mistakes

Where the hell is the "Loved" option on the Opinion box?

This hit so many different points for an opening - gorgeous cinematic scenery, great character development on the Owens brothers, Deen and Donners, and a classic mad scientist romp worthy of any 1950's monochrome scifi thriller. 

Of course the reader knows right away that the experiment is doomed, Frobisher is short several screws and Matt Owens is a total red-shirt minus the uniform - but that does nothing to dimenish the enjoyment of the chapter.

Just straight up kudos on this one.

Thanks!! rbs

Author's Response: Thank you for the exceedingly kind words here. I'm very excited for you going back and reading the one that started it all. This is going to be a bit of blast from the past for me. Also, a lot of the things that are happening in Quantum Divergence are harking back to this story as I thought it be fun to revisit a number of themes that kicked off the Star Eagle saga. My writing motivation has waned a bit over the last few months, and so this is great motivation for me to return to the keyboard. Hope the rest of the story keeps you as entertained as the beginning.