[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2020 13:38 Title: Day Eleven: Exit Music: II
An amusing meeting wrap with enough gaping holes to drive a runabout through. Looks like Owens decided to take the long view although I would expect him not to let go of the espionage issue - just take it behind the scenes.
A bit of fun about the sensor array and very nice bit of visual writing - which this entire story has benefitted from.
The story reminds me of the Voyager episode that included my wife's favorite line from any Star Trek episode - "There's coffee in that nebula..."
Thanks!! rbs
Author's Response: Not just the wifey. It's always been the one of the most iconic quotes of the series in my book, too. Very glad you've enjoyed this story so far and have appreciated the visual style I tired to invoke. It's great praise to know that it has worked so well.
Date: 16 Mar 2014 02:20 Title: Day Eleven: Exit Music: II
Ah, the wrap up meeting. It felt very much like a good little bow on all this, clearing up any lasting questions. I'm glad to see Decaux is going to get the help she needs (poor girl) and that Owens isn't going to throw the book at anyone (thumbs up, sir!). Really pleased with the interactions here ... I'm hoping for a certain couple to get together at the end (*cough* Clancy/Nora *cough*).
Author's Response: It's mental health awareness day on Eagle.