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Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2020 13:46 Title: Day Ten: Storm Warning: X

A literal cliff hanger within a cliff hanger. Nice monster sequence with Tela and a good end to an interesting monster.

Also quite enjoyable to see that the yacht got a much needed warp core (good callback to an obscure Trek reference - I think it only appeared in 1 episode of STNG and was never mentioned anywhere else except in rarely perused trek tech manuals.)

Very cinematic piloting sequence - which is always a bit of a trick to pull off. It was very easy to visualize.

Thanks!! rbs



Author's Response: I'm so fond of the cliffhanger, I had to take it to the logical next step .... (pun intended) Yeah, that was one thing that bothered me about the yacht. What's the point of having a starship without a warp engine. Seems pretty useless.

Reviewer: trekfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2014 21:33 Title: Day Ten: Storm Warning: X

Action packed, brimming with tough decisions and near death. I thought Xy was gonna bite the bullet there.

What a rush.



Author's Response: Had to be done. Story needed a good ol'fashioned bang for an ending.

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