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Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2020 11:41 Title: Day Ten: Storm Warning: IV

An emergency shuttle landing inside the bay... A really cinematic feel and great suspense/thriller writing.

And has Srena been in contact with the alien? It sounds as if the entire nebula might be alive.

Several characters pop off the page - not only Katanga, but Leva as well.

Thanks!! rbs



Author's Response: Emergency landings are always fun. Except for the occupants of said shuttles. It explains why there've been so many crashed shuttles in the history of Star Trek.

Reviewer: trekfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2014 20:46 Title: Day Ten: Storm Warning: IV

Oh, man, the nebula IS alive. Damn. It has to see the deployment of the array as some sort of attack or something and, like a body defending itself, is doing the same here ... man. It's gonna break the Eagle if things don't change. Heart racing chapter here, great action.



Author's Response: Good thing too, right? So far it's been mostly talking and speculating. Now something is actually happening for a change.

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