Reviews For Shadows in the Haze
Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed 
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Date: 27 Oct 2020 11:32 Title: Day Ten: Storm Warning: III
Author's Response: Something is worrisome is simmering under the surface here with the Vulcans. Same can be said for this entire nebula.
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2020 11:32 Title: Day Ten: Storm Warning: III
It feels as if there's a bit of a hive-mind thing happening among these wild vulcans. You have managed to take a relatively gentle scene and make it deeply unsettling.
There's an undercurrent that seems to suggest these vulcans can turn nasty very suddenly.
Thanks!! rbs
Author's Response: Something is worrisome is simmering under the surface here with the Vulcans. Same can be said for this entire nebula.
Reviewer: trekfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2014 20:40 Title: Day Ten: Storm Warning: III
Author's Response: Me things she's moving at warp speed and even Xylion is only going at impulse. She wants it bad.
Date: 13 Mar 2014 20:40 Title: Day Ten: Storm Warning: III
Whoa, Xy, the girl is moving on you fast and shields are failing, sir. I like the way she goes for it here. That must have thrown him off (rightly so) but there is a definite attraction between them. I'm sure her motivations are not as pure as they appear, but it's not like he minds. He doesn't, really.
Still, these Vulcans are a strange sort and ones I wouldn't trust very far. I'm hoping Xy has a Plan B if things go sideways.
Author's Response: Me things she's moving at warp speed and even Xylion is only going at impulse. She wants it bad.