Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2020 14:53 Title: Day Nine: Last Seen Wearing: VI

Okay - when the narrative followed Clancy instead of joining the hunt with Nora, I was totally like, "she's in his quarters, armed and off her rocker..." And you did not disappoint. Great crazy woman scene made even better because she's almost certainly not entirely wrong.

Whether the monsters are evil or not remains to be seen - they might just be xenophobic. But they're certainly not friendly at the moment.

I really appreciate all the layers you've built into this story. A real conspiracy (two counting the espianoge.. three counting Star's drug use...) And psychological drama - very subtly presaged. Quite the kettle of red herrings.

Thanks!! rbs

Author's Response: You clearly know your genre so its tough to catch you by surprise. And yeah, a lot of stuff is happening in this little tale (not so little).