[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2020 12:06 Title: Day Nine: Last Seen Wearing: III
You've built a really nice puzzle here with a lot of layers. A great mix of thriller/scifi/murder mystery storytelling.
So there was a conspiracy - just not one for murder... I'm not really sure how the public shaming was supposed to be accomplished, but then no conspiracy is perfect. And just enough clues along the way that it makes sense in the reveal without giving the reveal away. Lady Agatha would be proud.
And with yet another cliffhanger...
Thanks!! rbs
Author's Response: I agree, not the greatest plan ever devised. But then again, these guys' motives were a little suspect to begin with. Not to make excuses for Gedar, but when your motivation is simply to get back at somebody this badly, you're bound to make some leaps in your logic.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 20:36 Title: Day Nine: Last Seen Wearing: III
And so the first conspirator is brought in and with such a dramatic show, too! I like the way Nora confidently handles all this, she's really in her element here and seems to finally have a grasp on the entirety of the investigation. Alex was a laugh with the "I'm the good cop" line. Still shipping these two.
Author's Response: Okay, yeah, I admit, they are kinda cute together. No promises though if this means that they'll actually end up with each other.