[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2020 12:16 Title: Day Eight: Tinker, Tailor, Soldier, Spy: IV
Good resolution on the Star / Nora relationship. And pretty clear that was no mere diagnostic Hopkins was running. The spy has been found, but the culprit is in the air.
Very fun and a good quick, clear read. With the trademark cliff hanger..
Thanks!! rbs
Author's Response: Glad you liked this scene, it's one of my favorites in this story as it really cuts to the core of these two women. Star seems to be the winner here and while things are likely going to relax between these two moving forward after this, it won't all be smooth sailing exactly.
Date: 20 Feb 2014 21:05 Title: Day Eight: Tinker, Tailor, Soldier, Spy: IV
Hopkins is innocent of killing Gedar, which is good, but she seemed to be spaced out like Lif there earlier ... which leads me to believe that the starboard power tap problem was caused by her in that spaced out moment.
As for Nora and Star, it was a change to see Nora practically begging to save her friends and something I didn't expect. But I'm glad to have seen it and I think Star is too ... the ladies have come to an understanding which should make the rest of this trip easier to stomach.
Loved the dialogue here and the friendship on display. Well done.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I quite enjoyed writing this scene because it shows a completely different side of Nora. She may be a hardass but she is incredibly loyal to her friends and will gladly take a bullet for any one of them. Or worse, force herself to play nice with her arch-enemy.