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Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2020 13:07 Title: Day Seven: The Devil in Disguise: III

Even with just a few lines, Katanga pops off the page. It looks like Owens is finally tired of the sparking between Nora and Star and enforcing a little discipline. Beginning to get the feel of a captain.

Thanks!! rbs



Author's Response: Admittedly he's been an absentee captain for much of this story. Probably off trying to catch up on missed sleep.

Reviewer: trekfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 19:34 Title: Day Seven: The Devil in Disguise: III

Six Degrees of Lt. Gedar, it seems everyone is connected in some way to the guys death. I saw how Nora didn't even bother t bring up Hopskins name as a potential suspect, which I hope won't be a mistake later on when they catch the killer, whomever it may be. You can feel the frustration and chillyness come off the page here between Nora and Star -- I want to see those two trapped in a confined space for just a while ... just to see the fun.

 



Author's Response: Yeah, Nora is ignoring, for now, the rather important detail that Hopkins was seen with Gedar shortly before he was killed. As for Nora and Star, put them into a small room together and only one will probably emerge alive.

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