Date: 15 Dec 2009 20:34 Title: Chapter Six - Part Two
Must be damned frustrating to be apart after so long waiting to get together. Talk about missed chances. And it must be terribly tempting to just beam over! Urgh. But nice scene between the two that neatly conveys some of the long and wrangled road they've walked over the years. The path of true love never runs smooth. And it seems Shaughessy can atest to that statement too. Poor him. Though check out the hook up thread on the forums for some suggestions if he doesn't work things out.
Now, as I should have said in the last review, some damming and intriguing evidence found. Five identical planets?! Hmph! Somehting smells rotten. And speaking of speaking of smells. A clever crew working out the similarities and a means of overcoming one aspect of any attack. So our ghosts may just be hiding in plain sight! Bold on their part - even with technologically advanced cloaks. Where is this going to end up? At least the opening of communication channels might mean new information might be learned from the Romulans. A great weave of a tale - character interaction and a mystery to boot.
Author's Response: Beth and Tristan came to this story rather unexpectedly to tell the truth. :) As far as the ghosties? They be sneaky bastages.