Reviews For Shadows in the Haze
Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed 
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Date: 30 Sep 2020 12:48 Title: Day Six: Military Justice: I
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked the fight. I always approach these with a bit of trepidation since I've read so many fight scenes before that I just found either boring, difficult to follow or just far too long. I always strive to find the right balance when I try my hand at them.
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2020 12:48 Title: Day Six: Military Justice: I
"You bitch!" - classic cat fight words. A nice beat in the Nora/Clancy relationship. And a good fight description.
Action is typically difficult to pull off in print - especially to an audience used to seeing plenty of it fairly realistically portrayed on screen. Good fight scene.
Thanks!! rbs
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked the fight. I always approach these with a bit of trepidation since I've read so many fight scenes before that I just found either boring, difficult to follow or just far too long. I always strive to find the right balance when I try my hand at them.
Reviewer: trekfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2014 00:16 Title: Day Six: Military Justice: I
Author's Response: Not, too easily. She got sucker punched pretty good at first, perhaps too overconfident that Yunta wouldn't dare lay a finger on a superior officer. Of course after that she mobbed the floor with the younger Bajoran. Still it's not an encounter either is likely quick to forget.
Date: 14 Jan 2014 00:16 Title: Day Six: Military Justice: I
Well, Nora laid out Yunta pretty easily. Nicely done. I'm not sure who the murderer here is, but looks like Yunta just jumped up atop the list. Alex and Nora are still a completely shippable couple, so I'm pleased. Very pleased.
Author's Response: Not, too easily. She got sucker punched pretty good at first, perhaps too overconfident that Yunta wouldn't dare lay a finger on a superior officer. Of course after that she mobbed the floor with the younger Bajoran. Still it's not an encounter either is likely quick to forget.