[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2020 15:44 Title: Day Five: Presumed Innocent: VI
And the plot thickens. Really nice detective story going on here. And good intercutting between the A and B storylines - both of which present mysteries.
As always, Katanga just pops whenever he shows up. A really vibrant character. Kind of like Maya's wildcat - you just can't get enough of him.
Thanks!! rbs
Author's Response: Really glad the detective story aspect resonates so positively and I was actually really quite happy how the two plot lines played out here. You may be able to tell that I like to have at least two major plot lines running in parallel in my novels. Here it might have worked out better than in most other stories I've written.
Date: 15 Jul 2014 16:43 Title: Day Five: Presumed Innocent: VI
Love it. Waiting for some CSI type stuff and Katanga shows up with the goods. I love the science trek babble behind everything here - the dust and dust mites and the ship being swept by beams, etc. All good nods to continuity and fanon but the details as told by Katanga make it colourful and interesting. Hee, hee, the Doc is fun, colourful and interesting addition to proceedings. And now a new little twist. (Is Rosenthal blonde?)
Author's Response: You gotta have a bit of forensics in a murder investigation, right? Okay, it ain't CSI: Outer Space but I'm glad it all made sense to you. I also liked the opportunity to for once an for all explain why Starfleet ships are so damned clean all the time. I mean seriously, it's like they have a whole team going through the ship with dusters 24/7. I think my explanations makes a little bit more sense. (No, Rosenthal is not blonde).
Date: 14 Jan 2014 00:01 Title: Day Five: Presumed Innocent: VI
Gedar and Rosenthal? You're kidding me. I'm continuing to love the interplay between Nora and Alex, very much enjoy both. But I can't believe Rosenthal was a lover of Gedar. Now, was he a lover of Colcord? That I could believe. In a jealous rage he kills Gedar ... yeah, I can see that.
Author's Response: Or mayhap Rosenthal could have had a different motive all together ...