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Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2020 12:59 Title: Day Five: Presumed Innocent: III

Working under an alien influence... I kind of suspected that with the murder. 

Tazla is definitely trying too hard, but it seems to have worked out for the moment.

Totally fun and a good tease.

Thanks!! rbs



Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. I like this chapter as well, it has a bit of everything, including Star behaving like a big jerk. She even gets to punch somebody. Good times.

Reviewer: Miranda Fave Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2014 16:18 Title: Day Five: Presumed Innocent: III

What the heck!!! Well things have certainly taken a different turn. Lif seemed under the control of some force. The Nebula? The Vulcans? Definitely something very screwy going on here. Damned intriguing it is too.

Love Star. She's so perfectly flawed. From petty little actions and behaviours. To trying to pick a fight over niggly little matters to letting others slide like Aliris' dresscode because it sorta gets back at the captain. Huh. Petty, petty, petty. And she knows it too. However, I love it. Plus, she shows a certain loyalty to Katanga by sticking up for him by letting Aliris infringement of the dresscode slide. And she gives Owens credit for the way he handled her even if peeved at the end result and his lacking of trust. And that's the rub for her really. It seems she wants to be this better person and to be a better officer, heck her concern is a spy on board the ship overriding everything, but when things don't pan out she resorts to some of her less flattering attributes and traits.



Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoy Star here. I think she may be one of the most human characters I've ever written. Yeah, I know she ain't human but, well, you know what I mean. As you point out, she's flawed. Not just in her actions but also, sometimes, the way she thinks about certain things. If we are totally honest with ourselves, we sometimes think just like that, I believe. Sometimes we do little petty things not because we're evil or mean but because we can, or because they seem to make a certain sense to us, even if it is in a twisted kinda way.

Reviewer: trekfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2014 22:16 Title: Day Five: Presumed Innocent: III

Well, Star has her work cut out for her. This looks like some Vulcan mind-meld stuff going on here, or at least some subtle brain washing done via telepathic communication. There's little option left. Someone is definitely trying to sabotage things and they're using the crew to do it. The question is, who?



Author's Response: That sounds like a very reasonable theory as to what is going on.

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