[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2020 14:30 Title: Day Four: The Woman in White: III
Star must be really fit from all that jumping to conclusions... Not that she's wrong, but she could definitely benefit from a bit of scientific method. Perhaps she should have assigned Clancy to help her as well...
And there will almost certainly be a price for her to pay for keeping her theory from the Captain at this point...
Nice unfolding mystery.
Thanks!! rbs
Author's Response: There are definitely some shortcomings to these investigations. In Nora's case one could argue that she simply doesn't have the experience with criminal matters. Not quite sure what Star's excuse is.
Date: 14 Jul 2014 01:41 Title: Day Four: The Woman in White: III
mmm, has Star really revealled a saboteur or is her thirst to prove ahead of Nora's investigation and her own reckless thought process making her jump to conclusions? I'm inclined to believe she has. Of course, it could be a neat way to play us all for a fool. However, despite opportunity it does not seem that Kate has much motivation to carry out such an action.
Who does have such a motivation. It does feel like the murder and the EPS damage are connected and both are designed to undermine or cause the array to fail. One suspects an outside influence - a shapeshifter perhaps? Or is there something else at work here? Is it perhaps a case that the nebula has something more about it?
The mystery continues and you manage still to propel things onward. With a mystery of this size I could easily imagine myself spinning wheels with it. So far, things are being kept taut. Good job CeJay.
Author's Response: Star, jumping to conclusions? Trying to prove herself and beat Nora? How can you have such a low opinion of this woman? Just because she's a drug addict, and is keeping secrets from her captain, and used to be involved in shadowy intelligence activity, and once ran guns for .... alright, I get it. Not the best track record. We shall see how right she is and how and if things are as connected as you suspect.
Date: 13 Jan 2014 21:19 Title: Day Four: The Woman in White: III
Damn. Star is going to end up regretting jumping to such a conclusion I think, though I agree with her that the action had to be taken. Too many things are falling into place that fit her theory but I doubt it was Kate. Still, the engineering dept. is taking some heavy hits here (as they always seem to do) and getting anything done is going to be difficult.
Author's Response: Now that she's been virtually shut out of the murder investigation, she probably sees this as the chance to prove herself. Probably not the best ever motive to solve a mystery. But no doubt she's feeling the pressure.