Reviewer: FalseBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2013 23:52 Title: Chapter 3

Do like that Archer used him fame and rank to get past the ensign on the door, and Trip reaction to finding out why he was right, was well judge change on McCoy’s version.

Like the quick beam out, clearly Starfleet hasn’t invested in transporters jammer yet for the Psych ward.

Do like that you used the named Daedalus class ships from TOS/TNG/DS9 stories as the more advance ship trying to stop the old lady escaped.

The scene with T’Pol tempering her joy and talking with trip as their memories start to merge and his body burns up was a nice little extra scene that felt right for Enterprise setting.