Date: 10 Nov 2013 04:00 Title: Chapter 2
This was an interesting introspective chapter. Enlightening to see how this possession of the katra is influencing both T'Pol and Trip.
Some nice attention to detail in here, too. I loved the line about the foghorn; a subtle reminder that they are in SF without coming right out and saying it. The fact that the temperature is too cold for T'Pol, and Trip is remembering things about Vulcan he couldn't possibly know. Very deft and gentle handling of these delicate issues that add to the poignancy.
Date: 28 Oct 2013 23:44 Title: Chapter 2
So Archer room is the scene for the review of T’pol last moments as Soval helps to see if T’Pol has indeed put her Katra into Trip (why does that read so wrong?).
I like you’ve kept that the Vulcans are still trying to resolve the fact from fiction after T’Pau rise to authority.
Why do I think they won’t have an uneventful journey? Still archer and Phlox going a jail breaking I’m shock ;)
Do like that T’pol is finding inhabitant trip body an interesting experience.
I also do like that Tiberius from one Mirror see the value of T’Pol in making Spock his best supporting man.
Still wonderful scene as Trip can’t work out why he pre-occupied with Vulcan.
Date: 28 Oct 2013 21:08 Title: Chapter 2
There are little bits of subtle possession in here, nicely done.