Date: 10 Nov 2013 03:48 Title: Chapter 1
Again, I like the mirroring of the original. Alike but not quite. Definitely as it should have happened for this ship and crew.
The window into T'Pol's mind was fascinating; a glimpse we never had of Spock in the original. I daresay his thoughts would have been similar, but certainly more disrupted with McCoy's overly-emotional personality gumming up the works. ;-)
Date: 28 Oct 2013 23:35 Title: Chapter 1
Nice scene with Phlox and Archer in the 602 club.
Archer moping mourning is nicely contrast with Phlox optimistic view of life.
Did a good job of describing how tucker act odd while in the arts centre.
Was a nice touch to have Archer recall about the katra and then suspect that Tucker might have T’pol’s katra inside him.
Again was a nice touch as T’Pol katra comes to grips with where it at and Tucker experience a vision of T’Pol as the nurse/doctor knock him out.
Good re-imagine of the original material. I shall read on and hope that the rest is as good.
Date: 28 Oct 2013 21:03 Title: Chapter 1
Well, they are bonded. It's only, dare I say, logical.