Date: 05 Nov 2013 02:19 Title: Chapter 6 - Unstuck
I must admit, I'm sad that it's over. Couldn't you guys at the TIC have waited a few more days to "fix" it? ;-)
I was really getting into the plot, with everyone in their new roles, and wanted to see how it all panned out.
The ending was so cute, though. Way to come out of your shell a little, Levi.
Author's Response:
That ending just sort of appeared, and then it just compelled me.
Maybe I'll write more of the alternates some time. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 04 Nov 2013 19:41 Title: Chapter 6 - Unstuck
An absolute kicker of a story. Certainly held until the very end, the dialogue was good and something else (the mention of Hoshi as "a sexpot" provoked a smile). An imaginative story overall and one that inspires to greater writing :)
Author's Response:
Aw, I thank you! I'm sure MU Hoshi sees herself that way.
Date: 29 Oct 2013 19:55 Title: Chapter 6 - Unstuck
Oh Levi...
A nice, tidy, and cute little ending. Good job!
Author's Response:
I thank you - the ending just sort of ... happened.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 26 Oct 2013 19:17 Title: Chapter 6 - Unstuck
Otra get the key words out and then we get to see a bit of Carmen in the field, now didn’t the Admiral do a great job of suckering in Mirror Mayweather.
Rick tidying up the mirror security crew and playing I’m just the cleaner line was to perfection.
Levi big bouquet of flowers and Otra over excited Chavecol are just icing on the cake for this story. Does make me wonder what Andorian red bats are.
An excellent conclusion to a well though out and well execute masquerade story, which call on all your TIC characters and the cannon characters to good effect.
So I say it one last, this is a very excellent and enjoyable story.
Author's Response:
Oh, you are so kind. Thank you for reading and reviewing.