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Reviewer: Lil black dog Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2013 02:09 Title: Chapter 5 - Power

Now that's going to be an interesting pair.  And MU Sulu now a captain -- we get to see what we didn't see in "Mirror, Mirror."



Author's Response:

I always wanted him to be a captain!

Reviewer: TemplarSora Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2013 19:54 Title: Chapter 5 - Power

And I'm familiar with your take on Hoshi's rise to power, so to see it so much more chaotic and happen completely wrong is crazy to read. And interesting the idea of the Captain's Woman being a status symbol, no matter who the man is. I always assumed they were more just...toys, I suppose is a way to describe it, an idle pleasure for when the captain wasn't in the center chair. You paint the picture that, with how rare women are in your MU, they aren't just "things" to keep busy but no kidding symbols of the power a man has, whether of a starship or an empire. Neat idea. And of course he picks the one person who won't do anything with him, or try to do anything either. Smart man, this new captain Sulu.

Love how you wrote both men as quickly rising to power in their new "worlds," completely separated from their past lives and failures and anything that might have held them back. They reinvent themselves very quickly and capitalize quite successfully in both cases. Pretty awesome.

Author's Response:

And they change all that they touch, too!

Reviewer: FalseBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2013 19:06 Title: Chapter 5 - Power

Well that was an interesting to twist on events, seems Mirror Archer Ego still got him killed and then we have the dive up of the woman.

No surprise the Emperor took the Red hair bombshell, or that Hoshi went second. Typical of Mirror Hayes not to want the command, as he’s just a soldier, while the Emperor won’t give Reed the ship for being too eager.

So now Mirror Sulu has the defiant and T’pol as his show Captain’s woman.

Another well worked chapter and this Mirror masquerade story of yours just gets better and better, onwards to the new Mirror future.

Author's Response:

Ah you're too kind.

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