[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2020 13:59 Title: Day Three: The Big Sleep: VII
A bad call on Owens' part and a good one on Star's. I'm interested to see how that plays out.
Of course the blowout is a harbinger of not good things to come.
Again, Katanga pops off the page.
Thanks!! rbs
Author's Response: And that's the problem when you have an XO onboard you don't truly trust. It seems to have worked out okay for everybody though, right. Or has it? Well, the ship didn't blow up, so there is that.
Date: 05 May 2014 02:04 Title: Day Three: The Big Sleep: VII
Damn that woman is one brave SOB. Mad too. Insubordinate might be another description. However, it makes for an exciting sequence. However, me thinks the real excitement is not the fire scene itself but how exactly this fire started. Obviously, it has to be some form of sabotage. But why? And is there more to the theory of a spy operating on the vessel than first appears.
I noted a few spelling errors in this chapter by the way. Worth checking it out. Otherwise, another neat instalment to this mystery that adds to character intereactions and development as well as the mysteries.
Author's Response: Add yet another mystery to this already enigmatic (one would hope) story. Sorry about the spelling mistakes, hopefully I caught them all in the ebook version (probably not) but I haven't had the chance yet to come back here and fix them as well.
Date: 12 Jan 2014 21:54 Title: Day Three: The Big Sleep: VII
Got to love Star's can do attitude and I like her theory here. The spy seems to be making a lot of trouble and Something's got to be done about it before stuff gets bad. I feel Owens is going to be unhappy but she did the right thing Imo.
Author's Response: It's just not in her nature to sit still and wait for others to take action. This will likely get her in trouble before too long.