[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2022 08:59 Title: Prologue
Orion hybrids are so much fun... nice twist on the STE depiction in that the pheremones ork equally on females instead of giving them headaches and making them irritable to the point of ineffectiveness.
SFI, like S31, always makes for interesting story formats.
Looks like fun...
Thanks!! rbs
Date: 08 Jan 2011 16:09 Title: Prologue
Another great chapter.
Just when it looked like Gibraltar had a handle on things more Maquis show up but it wouldnt be normal if everything went according to plan now would it.
Looking forward to the next installment.
Date: 24 Jul 2009 17:15 Title: Prologue
Oh man. The Maquis have finally crossed the line. They blew up a Border Service cutter which Starfleet is out for blood. Sandhurst is hated by the Maquis making him a great choice to lead the task force. He's one of the few people they know won't mess around.
Captain Ebnal is quite the hardass too. Willing to take a Galaxy into the Badlands, risky but would definitely send a message.
As for Galmesh, I see Pava or Solly gutting him like a targ as a way of getting even.
And the Maquis are being relocated. They are lucky they get to take stuff with them. If it had been the Klingons they would of simply bombarded the planet and left no one alive most likely.
Overall, very nice read. Keep it up and want to see more soon.
Date: 24 Apr 2009 12:16 Title: Prologue
A very well done part. The Maquis are going to find that they've stirred up a hornet's nest--this isn't the old Starfleet they're dealing with.
I liked how Berkhalter dealt with the Maquis "Governor". As for Diaz, I have a feeling that Ariel is going to eventually regret the way she treated Diaz--Sabrina is neither an easy forgiver or forgetter.
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2009 20:40 Title: Prologue
I think Krysta is going to get bitten in the ass down the line for this. Will be interesting to see if the writer touches on this or I'm just reading more into it than I am...good material here!!!
Rob
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2009 22:12 Title: Prologue
A fantastic story so far and a lot of things to like.
Gibraltar gets to team up with some real muscle for a change. Something tells me it won't be quite enough to keep them out of real trouble.
Kincaid as a Maquis leader was a real surprise. Of all of Farragut's crew, he would have been the last I'd expected to join our favorite terrorist cell. But then again I never saw Eddington coming either.
And it looks like Gibraltar and company are going to get help from an old friend. I'm curious to see how Sandhurst will react to this unexpected reunion.
Date: 24 Mar 2009 18:17 Title: Prologue
Very much liking the way T'Ser interacts with Sandhurst! I think this may be the kind of solid relationship that he needs with his first officer to really get this crew put back together after all the hell they've been through.
After reading a lot of Gibraltar stories, I must say I have really taken umbrage at the way the Gibraltar's crew and specifically Sandhurst have been spoken of, just as Sandhurst did. He's not amoral. If anything, I think the tough decisions he made weighed on him to a point where it almost broke him earlier in the series. He's NOT Garak, not by any means.
Which brings me to another point. I would LOVE to see Garak go up against Elannis. He's probably the only spy I think could take her down. And after her little performances with Diaz and Sandhurst, I would LOVE to see her taken down. I really enjoyed seeing Sandhurst stand up to her and deliver that ultimatum.
It's really odd, reading this. I've never liked the Farragut's crew, whereas I've always been a huge fan of Gibraltar, so I find myself mentally squaring off against the Farragut personnel and...actually rooting for the Gibraltar crew to cut them down to size.
Date: 23 Mar 2009 19:21 Title: Prologue
What a cool way to handle prisoners! Very slickly written!