Date: 31 May 2013 00:22 Title: Chapter 21
So the story comes to a halt here! And all I can say is MOAR! I want to see how the ending pans out, I want to see how you can tackle all the mysteries you put forth and revealed in the first two Chronicle books and this one. Your use of time travel doesn't irk me so much and it's starting to feel a bit like Yesterday's Enterprise, and I hope you can resolve this story without bringing into question the events which happened in Yesterday's Enterprise. It hast to be a solution where captain Garrett meets her fate despite knowing what the older Winsor has told her.
I have a sneaking feeling you can pull this off, although questions remain, including this enemy of the Del'Vreer and also their methods of time travel. Plus you have to write an ending where the timeline for TNG, DS9 and VOY is not effected to. So I don't envy the challenge which faces you.
If this you pull this well then this story will be a masterpiece with the only disappointments being the OTT melodrama which happened in chapters 11 and 12. So here's to the completion of your third Chronicles book before this year is over! Here's also to your third book doing justice to what has so far been a rather gripping trilogy!
There are a huge amount of questions to be resolved and I can you can finish this book as fast as possible. In the meantime I'll be going over any other stories related to the cast of Star Trek Chronicles, so expect some more reviews in those particular stories!