Date: 26 May 2013 16:19 Title: Chapter 2
Best line: "Spock shifted on his heels. He wasn't used to wearing them yet." Priceless. And red-shirts seem to be able to get into trouble no matter the setting. Can't wait to see what Scotty is gonna build out of coconut shells. ;-)
Date: 23 May 2013 13:04 Title: Chapter 2
Well, at least Scotty isn't using this as an opportunity for a lifestyle change! A fun read.
Date: 22 May 2013 00:43 Title: Chapter 2
Comedy is timing and that's hard to do in writing. Not so for you timelady. You are a crazed loon for writing this stuff but boys can you write and are you clever.
Date: 21 May 2013 16:48 Title: Chapter 2
Coconuts!!
I await the inevitable coconut bra on ... someone.
Date: 21 May 2013 09:21 Title: Chapter 2
Oh so many giggles, dear.
Date: 21 May 2013 06:15 Title: Chapter 2
"Och, poor Ensign Carter. We hardly knew ye."
Captain Kirk held up the last of the torn red fabric that once was Ensign Carter's uniform. "Such a sad, sad waste of a young life. Simply tragic."
"Didn't anybody ever tell the fool of a boy that you just can't feed sharks by hand?" Broken words from Dr. McCoy.
Kirk patted his shoulder. "Apparently not, Bones. Apparently not."
Awesome redshirt moment!
Date: 21 May 2013 03:58 Title: Chapter 2
HAHAHA, a redshirt death! Glorious. Glorious.
Date: 21 May 2013 03:46 Title: Chapter 2
My God, is the crack strong with this one. The casual mention of Spock's heels cracked me up. Scotty and the coconuts did, too. Captain Kirk, and the red fabric of poor Carter. And man, the shark. It's genius, in a purely cracktastic way, and it makes me laugh.