Date: 21 May 2013 23:56 Title: Chapter 1 Moonrise
Paring down is one of the hardest things for me, too. The imagery here was amazing. You don't seem to have lost anything for the paring.
Author's Response: Thanks ('v') The scenes that I'm stitching together here are very cinematic, I can see them vividly in my mind's eye I'm trying to play to the Theatre Of The Mind - It's why I prefer full cast audio books over audio drama: atmospheric reading of description can really set the scene!
Date: 21 May 2013 04:13 Title: Chapter 1 Moonrise
This imagery really came to life given the recent meteor over Chelyabinsk. I hope McPherson makes it to safety.
Date: 20 May 2013 23:41 Title: Chapter 1 Moonrise
Wow, it starts off peaceful and quite quickly goes to dawning horror. Nice buildup there!
Date: 20 May 2013 22:16 Title: Chapter 1 Moonrise
Wow. Again, I'm struck by strong the visual image is here that you create Kirok. Amazing descriptors and sense of what is happening. It feels like a trailer of a blockbuster with all the cool Special Effects! Great job.
Date: 20 May 2013 18:22 Title: Chapter 1 Moonrise
Yikes. Good thing the many-legged steed was there to take the blast for Duncan. Poor steed. RIP.
Author's Response: One of the things I had to cut out was a bonding thread between Duncan and Blanche his Bantha -type steed