Date: 15 May 2013 18:06 Title: Chapter 24
Wow. Everything happening and coming to bear at exactly the same time. This is why communication is so important but because of the station, all these things were just mistimed. The losses mounted by Turner's group is expected and again, part of her seems to relish this. Sarine would be proud of the way she's conducting herself out there I feel.
Ianto got the shot off but Qwert did not. Now that he's missed, how is the sly Ferengi going to get out of this one? With the station's defenses hopefully falling fast, it'll be up to the Redemption to save his bacon ... assuming the survive.
I must say, I was impressed with the pacing of the chapter. I try myself not to vary between more than two POVs in a chapter as I just lose track of the pacing, but you kept things tight and consistent with the multiple views here. The series of events played out beautifully.