Reviews For Where No Gerbil Has Gone Before
Reviewer: Mistral Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2013 19:40 Title: Chapter 1
Date: 15 Aug 2013 19:40 Title: Chapter 1
The whole first part feels like a set up for that final line. Well played.
Author's Response:
Well ... yeah, ya got me.
Reviewer: SLWalker Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2013 03:30 Title: Chapter 1
Date: 02 May 2013 03:30 Title: Chapter 1
Okay, the first chapter is great. I cracked up at the end with Tripp yelling 'STELLA!' I mean, for obvious reasons. But what I really liked was the lighthearted sort of feeling in this part. Good atmospheric work!
Author's Response:
Thanks - the inspiration was fraternity initiations.
Reviewer: Lil black dog Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2013 17:58 Title: Chapter 1
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Date: 26 Apr 2013 17:58 Title: Chapter 1
Why does the last line conjure up images of Elaine from Seinfeld high on painkillers? ;-)
Can't wait to see where this is going...
Author's Response:
bluesman was right re the Streetcar reference. ;)