Date: 14 Apr 2013 23:34 Title: Chapter 4
Nice development and of course nice way to give some info on the sharks and world build the Trek history in little ways with references to WW3 etc.
Date: 17 Mar 2013 03:19 Title: Chapter 4
Interesting opposing points of view here - bait the shark so they can kill it, or assume it's already left the area and that no one else is at risk.
And poor Gary - you're already getting me to feel for the guy. I'd started watching TOS in the middle of the second season, so was already quite fond of members of the crew by the time WNMHGB rolled around. Not that I wanted Gary dead, but given a choice between him or Kirk, or Spock...but again, you've made him a sympathetic character - brought him to life if you will - and I'll never be able to watch that episode again without thinking of this and feeling more for Gary than I did before...
Author's Response: I think, what you see of Mitchell before the Barrier shows he's a good man. He's Kirk's womanising and bravado side ramped up a bit more but like Kirk he has good intentions perhaps. Imagine if Mitchell had stayed as a sort of first officer, right through into the movies.
Author's Response: I think, what you see of Mitchell before the Barrier shows he's a good man. He's Kirk's womanising and bravado side ramped up a bit more but like Kirk he has good intentions perhaps. Imagine if Mitchell had stayed as a sort of first officer, right through into the movies.