Reviewer: Nerys Ghemor Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2009 05:37 Title: Part IV: Zero Moment - Chapter 5

Wow.

That was an unbelievably powerful segment right there.

I am also reminded of something you wrote on my behalf during the Round Robin, something I am very honored to re-read now.  I remember the scene where you have Gul Berat trying to save Seren's first ship--it feels very similar, except for the fact that Berat was not able to make it in time.  Thank God Scotty was physically capable of a better outcome--I suspect many, many people would've been done in by what he attempted.

Author's Response: Probably, yeah. It was real, immediate danger. And he couldn't send someone else to do it. Thank you, very much!