Reviewer: SLWalker Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2013 20:27 Title: Piece 4 - Ricochets

Definitely some kind of test, it almost has to be. 42753 might be a decoy; I hope so and not all at once if that makes sense. I like the way all of them are comforting the little girl, that's very sweet and definitely a point in their favor. It should be fascinating to see what the resolution is to this whole thing.

Author's Response:

I had felt, when I looked at this story again before posting it, that this is the weakest chapter. I think the other bits were better thought out, truth be told.