Reviewer: SLWalker Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2013 19:55 Title: Piece 1 - Tangle

Wow, you don't go for little mind-screws, do you? Travis takes it all fairly well, considering. There's nothing about this chapter that makes sense, but I have a feeling that it's designed that way. Even so, I like the fact you can immediately come up with a cast of characters as likely as not to be engaging, and it'll definitely be interesting to see where this premise goes!

Author's Response:

Ha, thanks!

This was the first multi-chapter Trek fan fic I ever tackled.